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【万国短文】A very moving story!! Comment and read this short story!!!! A Beautiful Love Story. A Couple met with an accident. When they woke up in the hospital, the boy lost his eyes. Months passed... the girl left the boy because she was discouragd having a blind boyfriend. After a year, the boy died in despair. The girl went to his burial, and saw a letter on top of his cabin. The Letter was for her... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... it said "Take care of my eyes, I love you so much" [ 此贴被(五羊)在2008-03-09 05:53重新编辑 ]

[楼主] Posted:2007-04-03 19:06\|

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什么女孩嘛。。。。。这种人不值得爱。。。。
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[1 楼] Posted:2007-04-03 19:14\|

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Do you think it is the boy's avenge to tell the girl that he gave his eyes to her for her dumping of him making the girl feel guilty and rueful at the rest of her life because he could choose to hide the truth with his death? To me, I would sacrifice to make my beloved man who also loves me very much happy and healthy and no matter what happens to him I would stand by and take care of him for this life but only on the condition that he shall love me. Maybe it's a little selfish. So the most important thing is to know the person very well and find one loving you very much though it's difficult sometimes.

[2 楼] Posted:2007-04-03 20:21\|

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he should've told her that that's for respecting his girlfriend. but he didn't. WANNA HEAR MY COMMENT? THAT GUY IS A JERK.

[3 楼] Posted:2007-04-07 04:55\|

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wat 4 telling the girl?if u already died,juz go with those secretes.if told the girl,then she will lives with guilty and keep blaming her self...

[4 楼] Posted:2007-04-22 22:56\|

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看的懂，可是用英语表达出我的感觉，好痛苦啊，自从大一把四级过了以后，就完全把英语扔了，想要拣起来，好难那
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[5 楼] Posted:2007-04-26 19:21\|

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Yes, the love of the boy is not a true unregretble love!

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i feel that ,the boy is really loving the girl.... Although the girl left the boy,the boy still love her... the boy is correct to tell the girl that the eyes is him,but not her.To make her know that how the boy loves her!!!

[7 楼] Posted:2008-04-07 14:22\|

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What if.............. the boy only donated one eye to his girl friend? so, they both could still see and love each other.
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[8 楼] Posted:2008-04-13 09:30\|

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下面是引用三貓于2008-04-13 09:30发表的:
What if.............. the boy only donated one eye to his girl friend?

so, they both could still see and love each other.

That's quite true... But girls are very conscius with their look, aren't they?

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[9 楼] Posted:2008-04-13 20:19|

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下面是引用芝麻豆腐于2008-04-13 20:19发表的:

That's quite true... But girls are very conscius with their look, aren't they?

Exactly, that boy deeply understood girls are very concern about their looks. That's why he rather like to sacrifice his both eyes and then the girl he love so much could continue live on with happiness. This was true love.

Most of the people are looking for beautiful and perfect things. Not too many people are willing to have a disfigure partner. Too bad to say this is most people's weak point.

My opinion, in this situation, the girl didn't know the fact, and the boy didn't tell her in the first place. So that really couldn't blame any one.

This is only a love story with a sad ending.

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[10 楼] Posted:2008-04-13 22:46|

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下面是引用三貓于2008-04-13 22:46发表的:

Exactly, that boy deeply understood girls are very concern about their looks. That's why he rather like to sacrifice his both eyes and then the girl he love so much could continue live on with happiness. This was true love.

Most of the people are looking for beautiful and perfect things. Not too many people are willing to have a disfigure partner. Too bad to say this is most people's weak point.
.......

Yeap...

Perhaps if the boy tells the truth in the first place, the story would end in a different way... But if he did, he'll never know the value of love the girl had put upon him...

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[11 楼] Posted:2008-04-14 20:16|

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下面是引用芝麻豆腐于2008-04-14 20:16发表的:

Yeap...Perhaps if the boy tells the truth in the first place, the story would end in a different way... But if he did, he'll never know the value of love the girl had put upon him...

.......

Okay, lets try another scenario......................

If the boys told her the fact, she so touched by his sacrifice of his eyesight for her. She might be willing to marry him and take care of him forever.

Isn't it a HAPPY ENDING?

PS: If she knew the fact and still dumped him, then she is a jerk, not the boy.

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[12 楼] Posted:2008-04-15 02:35|

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